Kia ora Toby It's Jesse here from Grey Main School I like how you have written the facts about the Sun. I never knew that the Sun weighed 333,000. I also like how you have done Backgrounds for each slide. Maybe next time you could put more detail in each slide.
Kia ora Toby It's Jesse here from Grey Main School I like how you have written the facts about the Sun. I never knew that the Sun weighed 333,000. I also like how you have done Backgrounds for each slide. Maybe next time you could put more detail in each slide.
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